July 31, 2017: Thank you, but
not for us….
Another rejection on my Adult
Romance/Suspense. “Not for us…” That seems to be a phrase overused by
publishers when the answer is no. But it’s encouraging when they go on to
explain that just because it isn’t a fit for us, doesn’t mean it won’t work
somewhere else. In a perfect world, they would mention where it would work...but I guess that perfect
world doesn’t exist for writers. So another one comes off the list. Lucky for
me, I still have 6 would-be publishers still on the hook for that particular
manuscript, but this weekend will be another marketing blitz to identify still
other opportunities. This publisher did mention something I hadn’t heard
before: should you do a major rewrite on
this manuscript, please consider re-submitting to us after six months. Hmmm….I
love options. So this reinforces the idea there’s always room for improvement.
I’ve read many times that some authors refuse to revise. It just makes sense if
you see rejection after rejection, something isn’t working. Maybe the plot is
good, but the story has weak spots. Or maybe the backstory doesn’t work with
the main plot. Earlier, I mentioned a list I’m using to determine if/when the
story is ready to submit. 1. What does each character contribute to the story?
2. Did I tie up his/her story line?
3. Are all his/her scenes as believable as possible?
My list of priorities mentioned in last week’s blog just got a new item added to the secondary list: revise BLOOD MONEY, using the list above. Instead of getting depressed and giving up, I’m more determined than ever! Remember: my success/failure is directly a result of my actions - if I don’t try, I’ll never succeed.
But here's something to make you smile - a recent picture of my writing assistant.