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Sandi Underwood was born a PK (Preacher’s Kid) in the beautiful East Tennessee Mountains, where family stories were passed down, generation-to-generation. Her love of writing was cultivated at an early age when family get-togethers and Church dinners-on-the-grounds provided an idyllic backdrop for memories that fuel her stories. Sandi’s early career included working with children in both the public and private sectors. Later in life, her path took a different direction, but her love of books was ever-present. Today, she shares a home with her rescue dog, Gus, and draws inspiration from her grandchildren as she continues to write for both children and adults. Learn more at www.sandiunderwood.net and track her writing journey at www.sandiu.blogspot.com, follow her on Twitter @SandiGCY, and like her Facebook page at Sandi Underwood/gcywriter or email her at sandiu@comcast.net.

Monday, January 29, 2018

January 29, 2018:  Market/Target Age
My goal last week was to take my Young Adult story - ON A SCALE OF ONE TO TEN - down to Middle Grade, or ages 8-12. Did I succeed? Nope, it’s definitely a WIP (work in progress). I read several MG and YA books, looking for comparisons, likes, and differences; and lately, I’ve read several chapter books, to get in the right mindset of the character and to grasp a better understanding of how the authors play with words.
There are many articles out there that address age-appropriate books. One bit of helpful advice I found: Bookstores have a shelf for MG and another for YA, but there is not a shelf in-between.

However after that, the information turns gray. Apparently, there are upper MG or lower YA. Another article suggested a good target age for MG is 14 years old, but then, another one stated a writer should aim higher or lower as 14 years old represents change, hormones, on the cusp, etc. I guess there’s no real set-in-stone rule when it comes to writing MG or YA, other than one publisher recently stated the YA market didn’t “take off” as it was anticipated. Since my story, SCALE, cannot jump from YA to Adult, my goal of taking it down to MG seems to be my only option. How do I accomplish that? The most obvious is to make sure my Main Character is involved in age-appropriate scenes, i.e., year of school, activities, and angst. I also read the MG character isn’t necessarily involved in edgy activities, but can certainly have a parent who is a drunk, on drugs, etc. That’s all fine and dandy, but my MC’s best friend is a victim of child abuse, and don’t even begin to tell me that doesn’t happen to MG age children…and younger. Child abuse can happen at any age, and at the end of my story, there’s a list of agencies that offers assistance. The message is important. The story is edgy. The age is fluid, but I must narrow it down to one genre and the way to do that is to read, read, read what the market is selling. Middle Grade it is.

Monday, January 22, 2018

(Blood Money-due out in 2018)

 January 22, 2018:  Hello again and Happy New Year. I took a little hiatus from my blog to concentrate on writing. I received the first-round edits of Blood Money on New Year’s Day and spent almost three weeks revising. This Editor provided great feedback and instructions, so it became a labor of love. Here are a few tips they provided:
Find and correct “reached (I’m guilty of writing she reached out her hand and caressed his face. Of course she did. Better: she caressed his face.); felt (Wrong: She felt as if she could cry. [That is wrong for so many reasons-better to show the action instead of telling it.]); he said/she said (replace with action to show who is talking-as in: she turned to face him.); that (so many “thats” can be deleted and won’t change the meaning), to him, for her, and at her (normally found at the end of a sentence and not needed, as she smiled at him.). And did you know blond refers to him, while blonde refers to her? Ditto for brunet/brunette, and fiancĂ©/fiancĂ©e.  

Blood Money is my adult mystery, started in 2009--the first of three in the Baker Manor Series. It has gone through many changes; however, the basic plot remained the same. Every revision makes me a better writer. And now, while waiting for the next round of edits to come back, I will use the same revision tips with book # 2 in the series. After that, my goal is to outline the third and final book in the series. Then, I begin the revision on my manuscript on child abuse. One editor recommended I take it from young adult to middle-grade. I will take my own advise I gave yesterday to a wannabe writer: BIC (Butt In Chair, step one to being a writer).